redemption

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redemption

Postby manslaughter » Fri Mar 21, 2008 9:23 pm

First timer here, never posted my stuff b4. It's not a battle but I couldnt find anywhere else to post. Let me know what you think.

addiction bleeds my sanity
fractures my mentality
fantasy's reality
i fiend for the tragedy
silence drives this twisted soul
of memories i cant let go
violence grips and takes control
in the dark i fall alone,
cold to pain
like frost on a window,
shalow - life living in the gallows
pain fades, shame stays
hate feeds the flame
tainted feelings
hidden meanings
fill my life with pain
now alone I dwell
bleading my deamons in hell,
forced to squalor in the gutter
deep wounds wont heal
bitersweest deaths caress
free from the stress
travel in the shadows
living life in the darkness

take away all my hate
all my shame all my pain
take away all this anger that pumps through my veins
show me light
in the darkness my conciounce remains
give me hope that redemption
one day i'll atain
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Postby admin » Sat Mar 22, 2008 12:18 pm

that is pretty deep and meaningful. An insight into a troubled soul! I'd like to read how it finishes.
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